"I'm doing it.
I'm joining up."
"But, you'll be thirty soon, doesn't that matter?"
"Nope, not to them."
Lindsay was concerned, it was something she never
expected. Pete had talked about this
before, but never in her wildest dreams did she think it could actually happen.
"Look Linds," Pete smiled at her, "when I was
a teenager, joining the service was being manipulated by the government to die
for oil. Even Desert Storm was just kind
of a joke with no danger. I even got the
trading cards & toys for my 8th birthday."
"Yeah, so? I got my little ponies, you don't see me
trying out for the Mounties.
"They're Canadian."
"Not the point Peter."
"Anyways, then
this new war starts up during college, and I'm still just a kid. I have no concept of duty or being part of
something bigger than myself. And then it turns out to be even more about oil,
and I have friends guarding poppy fields.
What kind of war is that? "
"Right, I understand that, so what are you expecting to
get from this?"
The conversation didn't go well. Pete really thought Lindsay would get
it. The lights of the recruiting station
shone down, glowing bright whitish blue.
Like a bug zapper thought
Pete.
Lindsay looked at her hands.
They weren't old. She moisturized
every day. Not working outside all year
long definitely made her hands softer than her mother's. Why do
I obsess over these. Lindsay saw her hands as tools. Capable and versatile. Maybe if she thought of them as instruments
or dainty Pet wouldn't. No, that is not it. She loved Pete, and
she supported Pete, but how do you support someone when their choices lead them
away from you. Not emotionally, but
physically. Hands that are capable and versatile. . .
MALE
29 SOLAR REVOLUTIONS OF AGE
HIGH BLOOD PRESSURE
OVER 20% BODY FAT
CAPABLE INTELLIGENCE
PATERNAL HISTORY OF CARDIAC DISEASE, ALCOHOLISM, HIGH CHOLESTEROL
MATERNAL HISTORY OF CANCER, DIABETES, EMOTIONAL INSTABILITY. . .
. . .
. . .
REPAIRABLE
STATUS. . .
ACCEPTABLE 75 PERCENTILE
I
knew it thought Pete. He wasn't sure
what repairable meant, but he felt confident that it had something to do with
the medical tech that they had given in good faith. Pete followed the flashing white lights on
the floor out into the corridor. At the
same time, a sandy haired dude about his age, but a bit mousier in his
features.
"Isn't this great!?"
"Great?"
"Yeah, fixing our health
problems and sending us out there!
That's great!"
"What makes you think they are
going to fix them? Would you operate on
your dog before you put it down?"
"What? No, we're helping,
we've been accepted. We're a part of
something! Why are you here?"
"Seemed preferable to
prison." said the sandy haired man blankly.
"Guess we're just lambs for the slaughter."
Pete stared at the man. He thought he was joining a brotherhood. Doing his duty, not just for his Country, but
his entire Planet, the entire Universe! The walls opened and a strange pale green
light emitted. He couldn't move. The floor turned into a conveyor belt. In the next room his body was augmented with
machine parts. The green glow help him
in place. He couldn't scream. A chip was put into his brain. He was going to fight. On the front lines. He was designed to be
part of the first wave. NO! Pete's
brain railed against the machines assaulting him. I'm
still me! I am Pete! I am human!
He began to feel again. He could rotate his eye. He saw the final vestige of the sandy haired
man as a tight fitting metal helmet was sealed around his blonde skull. Pete
turned his vision to the small window, he could see the earth, he could see the
door to the recruitment center, he could see. . . Lindsay? NO!
Lindsay had made up her mind. If Pete was joining up, she would too. She could be with the man she loved. She could put her hands to use.
A little rocky start (minor grammer, the whole hands symbolism seemed oddly introduced, time setting was somewhat confusing), but awesome ending!
ReplyDeleteAre you going to write a sci-fi series?!?!
yeah, I finished it late and didn't do any editing, I figured first day, I'd just go for it.
DeleteThe hands idea was just discovered, I based the beginning on an old friend of mine who was obsessed with her hands.
Time was supposed to be confusing.
I'm not writing a sci-fi series yet, I just had an idea yesterday and this is what it became.